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Let's suggest 87/ Taking it easy 33
Message de F)
Hello dear Friends!
Another easy exercice that everyone can do!
Je sais que l'Expression libre est la compétence la plus difficile à bien acquérir dans l'apprentissage d'une langue, même si elle est notre langue maternelle, d'ailleurs...
Certains m’avaient dit être gênés d’exprimer des idées personnelles ( - ils avaient l’impression – souvent fausse – de les exprimer maladroitement
) Vous savez que je ne vous demande pas de " raconter votre vie " si vous ne le désirez pas... Je souhaite juste vous voir vous exprimer sur tout sujet aussi " librement " que possible.
De plus, je pense que vous aurez maintenant compris que pour moi, toute expression, même maladroite, est intéressante et a de la valeur. Elle nous stimule tous à " trouver mieux " !
Voici les questions auxquelles vous pourrez répondre :
1. What household chore do you hate most? Why?
2. Do you lend money easily?
3. Are you well organised, at work? at home?
4. Are you an early bird, or a night owl?
Vous pouvez répondre à 1 ou 2 questions au choix – en notant bien les références - et développer celle(s) que vous voulez, jusqu’à atteindre en tout un maximum d’environ 150 mots.
Envoyez-moi vos réponses en mp et je publierai une première série que vous 'corrigerez' (en bleu d’abord pendant deux jours) puis en vert… Une fois le premier texte corrigé au mieux, je publierai ensuite la deuxième série... (sans changements donc ! ) Vous gagnez de la liberté (celle de ne pas parler de plusieurs sujets, ceux qui ne vous " inspirent pas "... Vous écrivez la longueur que vous voulez, vous pouvez choisir d'inventer, de plaisanter, ou de répondre avec sérieux... Nous vous suivrons !
Cet exercice sera pour vous un
ou en fonction de la qualité de vos écrits et des difficultés (surmontées) dans la prestation...
Cet exercice sera corrigé (j'espère !)le mardi 10 juin ! Go for it! with THE FORCE.
Message de F)
Hello dear Friends!
Another easy exercice that everyone can do!
Je sais que l'Expression libre est la compétence la plus difficile à bien acquérir dans l'apprentissage d'une langue, même si elle est notre langue maternelle, d'ailleurs...
Certains m’avaient dit être gênés d’exprimer des idées personnelles ( - ils avaient l’impression – souvent fausse – de les exprimer maladroitement
) Vous savez que je ne vous demande pas de " raconter votre vie " si vous ne le désirez pas... Je souhaite juste vous voir vous exprimer sur tout sujet aussi " librement " que possible. De plus, je pense que vous aurez maintenant compris que pour moi, toute expression, même maladroite, est intéressante et a de la valeur. Elle nous stimule tous à " trouver mieux " !
Voici les questions auxquelles vous pourrez répondre :
1. What household chore do you hate most? Why?
2. Do you lend money easily?
3. Are you well organised, at work? at home?
4. Are you an early bird, or a night owl?
Vous pouvez répondre à 1 ou 2 questions au choix – en notant bien les références - et développer celle(s) que vous voulez, jusqu’à atteindre en tout un maximum d’environ 150 mots.
Envoyez-moi vos réponses en mp et je publierai une première série que vous 'corrigerez' (en bleu d’abord pendant deux jours) puis en vert… Une fois le premier texte corrigé au mieux, je publierai ensuite la deuxième série... (sans changements donc ! ) Vous gagnez de la liberté (celle de ne pas parler de plusieurs sujets, ceux qui ne vous " inspirent pas "... Vous écrivez la longueur que vous voulez, vous pouvez choisir d'inventer, de plaisanter, ou de répondre avec sérieux... Nous vous suivrons !
Cet exercice sera pour vous un
ou en fonction de la qualité de vos écrits et des difficultés (surmontées) dans la prestation...Cet exercice sera corrigé (j'espère !)le mardi 10 juin ! Go for it! with THE FORCE.
Réponse : Let's suggest 87/ Taking it easy 33 de E)
Hello dears,
Toujours beaucoup de constance et de persévérance !
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ANSWER A: Topic1: What household chore do you hate most? Please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy to you.
As far as I'm concerned, the worst household chore that puts me off the most is chasing dust and dirt.
Sweeping or vacuuming is exhausting. And dust and dirt come from everywhere: in the country house, it's the dust from the chimney, and the dirt from the garden, in the city, it's the dust from the street, and by the sea, you've got sand flying everywhere. It doesn't matter whether the house is new, modern or old, whether the floor is covered with marble or parque, dust still gets in.
Then the upkeep of the kitchen and bathrooms is the most demanding part of the chore. I feel like I'm spending my day with a sponge and a rag in my hand, because I have to wipe up the kitchen and bathrooms, several times a day.
In my opinion, cleaning the house is the least rewarding of all household chores, because this kind of task is never finished, you have to start all over again.
Thanks for your help!
Réponse : Let's suggest 87/ Taking it easy 33 de E)
ANSWER A: Topic1: What household chore do you hate most? Please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy to you.
A very good text!
As far as I'm concerned, the worst household chore xx xx that puts me off the most is chasing dust and dirt. "Worst" and "the most" don't fit together in this sentence, unless you add commas and two small words .
Sweeping or vacuuming is exhausting. And dust and dirt come from everywhere: in the country house, it's the dust from the chimney, and the dirt from the garden, in the city, it's the dust from the street, and by the sea, you've got sand flying everywhere. It doesn't matter whether the house is new, modern or old, whether the floor is covered with marble or parque, dust still gets in.
Then the upkeep of the kitchen and bathrooms is the most demanding part of the chore. I feel like I'm spending my day with a sponge and a rag in my hand, because I have to wipe up the kitchen and bathrooms, several times a day.
In my opinion, cleaning the house is the least rewarding of all household chores, because this kind of task is never finished, you have to start all over again.
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Modifié par gerold le 01-06-2025 09:09
Réponse : Let's suggest 87/ Taking it easy 33 de E)
Hello dears,
Thanks for your indications. Here are mine...
ANSWER A: Topic1: What household chore do you hate most? Please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy to you.
A very good text!
, gerold wrote! I agree! Well done... As far as I'm concerned, the worst household chore xx xx that puts me off the most is chasing dust and dirt. ("Worst" and "the most" don't fit together in this sentence, unless you add commas and two small words .The sentence, as it is is clumsy...)
Sweeping or vacuuming is exhausting. And dust and dirt come from everywhere: in the country house, it's the dust from the chimney,(in summer too? and in Australia?)
and the dirt from the garden, in the city, it's the dust from the street, and by the sea, you've got sand flying everywhere. It doesn't matter whether the house is new, modern or old, whether the floor is covered with marble or parque(I'd say something much more common...), dust still gets in.Then the upkeep of the kitchen and bathrooms is the most demanding part of the chore. I feel like I'm spending my day with a sponge and a rag in my hand, because I have to wipe up the kitchen and bathrooms, several times a day.(Teach your family to clean after themselves!
Believe me, it'll pay in the long run...)
In my opinion, cleaning the house is the least rewarding of all household chores, because this kind of task is never finished, you have to start all over again. TTB!
Very good work, indeed.
Réponse : Let's suggest 87/ Taking it easy 33 de E)
Hello!
ANSWER A: Topic1: What household chore do you hate most? Please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy to you.
As far as I'm concerned, the worst household chore, the one that puts me off the most, is chasing dust and dirt. ("Worst" and "the most" don't fit together in this sentence, unless you add commas and two small words .The sentence, as it is is clumsy...)
Sweeping or vacuuming is exhausting. And dust and dirt come from everywhere: in the/a country house, it's (chimney) soot (in summer too? and in Australia?) and garden dirt, in the/a city, it's street dust, and by the sea, you've got sand flying everywhere. It doesn't matter whether the house is new, modern or old, whether the floor is covered with marble or wood, dust still gets in.
Then the upkeep of/upkeeping the kitchen and bathrooms is the most demanding part of the chore. I am not sure about where the problem is. Perhaps upkeeping etc. is the chore itself, not a part of it?. I feel like I'm spending my day with a sponge and a rag in my hand, because I have to wipe up the kitchen and bathrooms, several times a day. (Teach your family to clean after themselves! Believe me, it'll pay in the long run...)
In my opinion, cleaning the house is the least rewarding of all household chores, because this kind of task is never finished, you have to start all over again. TTB!
How do you understand "still" in "dust still gets in" ("toujours/encore" ou "quand même")?
Réponse : Let's suggest 87/ Taking it easy 33 de E)
Hello dears,
ANSWER B: 3. Are you well organised, at work? at home?
Please indicate mistakes and underline what looks clumsy to you.
I have no choose. I am organized at my work; I must be ! because my manager is terrible. If we don't respect the dates or the times, if we don't put order into the different files, every thing go wrong. Whe loose a lot of money if we arenot organised. At home, it's different. My house is often in mess and it is not important, really. Some time, I don't wash my plates and forks and knifes during several days, and I don't have enough of plates. My parents tell I'm disgusting and I will never be married, but I laugh. I don't like thigs organized. I have enough organization at work! 118 words
Thanks for your help!
Réponse : Let's suggest 87/ Taking it easy 33 de E)
Hello!
Sorry, I can’t copy the text.
Mistakes:
X choose - every thing go - whe loose - arenot - some time - knifes- enough of - tell - thigs organized
Clumsy:
X at my work - be ! Because - the times - put order into the différent files - I have enough organisation
Réponse : Let's suggest 87/ Taking it easy 33 de E)
Hello dears, hello faithful gerold !
Don't worry, I understand your indications….
Green allowed
Réponse : Let's suggest 87/ Taking it easy 33 de E)
Hello dears,
Je ne sais pas pourquoi je vous avais fixé cette date si tôt (le 11) alors que rien ne pressait ... Excès de zèle... de fatigue?
Ce soir (le 12) je vais donc vous donner la " correction " du texte A qui a été travaillé à fond. Bravo !
Cependant, j'attendrai un peu pour reprendre le texte B , et donnerai mes indications à la fin de cette première partie de correction. Le reste viendra après vos interventions au sujet du texte B; au pire, je vous donnerai au moins les pistes pour tout corriger le 15 lorsque nous changeons de période, et de devoirs... ANSWER A: Topic1: What household chore do you hate most? Gerold’s indications:
'A very good text!' Gerold wrote. and I added: indeed it is!
As far as I'm concerned, the worst household chore xx xx that puts me off the most is chasing dust and dirt. "Worst" and "the most" don't fit together in this sentence, unless you add commas and two small words .
Sweeping or vacuuming is exhausting. And dust and dirt come from everywhere: in the country house, it's the dust from the chimney, and the dirt from the garden, in the city, it's the dust from the street, and by the sea, you've got sand flying everywhere. It doesn't matter whether the house is new, modern or old, whether the floor is covered with marble or parque, dust still gets in.
Then the upkeep of the kitchen and bathrooms is the most demanding part of the chore. I feel like I'm spending my day with a sponge and a rag in my hand, because I have to wipe up the kitchen and bathrooms, several times a day.
In my opinion, cleaning the house is the least rewarding of all household chores, because this kind of task is never finished, you have to start all over again.
ANSWER A: Topic1: What household chore do you hate most? My indications after Gerold’s
A very good text!
, gerold wrote! I agree! Well done... As far as I'm concerned, the worst household chore xx xx that puts me off the most is chasing dust and dirt. ("Worst" and "the most" don't fit together in this sentence, unless you add commas and two small words .The sentence, as it is is clumsy...)
Sweeping or vacuuming is exhausting. And dust and dirt come from everywhere: in the country house, it's the dust from the chimney,(in summer too? and in Australia?) and the dirt from the garden, in the city, it's the dust from the street, and by the sea, you've got sand flying everywhere. It doesn't matter whether the house is new, modern or old, whether the floor is covered with marble or parque(I'd say something much more common...), dust still gets in.
Then the upkeep of the kitchen and bathrooms is the most demanding part of the chore. I feel like I'm spending my day with a sponge and a rag in my hand, because I have to wipe up the kitchen and bathrooms, several times a day.(Teach your family to clean after themselves!
Believe me, it'll pay in the long run...) In my opinion, cleaning the house is the least rewarding of all household chores, because this kind of task is never finished, you have to start all over again. TTB!
Very good work, indeed.
ANSWER A: Topic1: What household chore do you hate most? Gerold's suggestions:
As far as I'm concerned, the worst household chore, the one that puts me off the most, is chasing dust and dirt.
Sweeping or vacuuming is exhausting. And dust and dirt come from everywhere: in the/a * country house, it's (chimney) soot (in summer too? and in Australia?) and garden dirt, in the/a city, it's street dust, and by the sea, you've got sand flying everywhere. It doesn't matter whether the house is new, modern or old, whether the floor is covered with marble or wood, dust still gets in.
Then
(That's it! for your explanation...) I feel like I'm spending my day with a sponge and a rag in my hand, because I have to wipe up the kitchen and bathrooms, several times a day. In my opinion, cleaning the house is the least rewarding of all household chores, because this kind of task is never finished, you have to start all over again. TTB!
* 'The' house isn't determined. Therefore, it's 'a house'.
- How do you understand "still" in "dust still gets in" ("toujours/encore" ou "quand même")? I’d say « quand même » !
- Lien internet
to be high maintenance: like Monica: one of the characters in Friends: maniaque de la propreté.
- [It looks as if you're speaking from experience!) : sentir le vécu.(être dû à l'expérience) it sounds as if [sb] is speaking from experience.
- A British proverb: 'a woman's job is never done.'( : never finished!) why should it only be 'a woman's job?'
Our boys and men have changed, don't you think? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
ANSWER B: 3. Are you well organised, at work? at home? initial text.
I have no choose. I am organized at my work; I must be ! because my manager is terrible. If we don't respect the dates or the times, if we don't put order into the different files, every thing go wrong. Whe loose a lot of money if we arenot organised. At home, it's different. My house is often in mess and it is not important, really. Some time, I don't wash my plates and forks and knifes during several days, and I don't have enough of plates. My parents tell I'm disgusting and I will never be married, but I laugh. I don't like thigs organized. I have enough organization at work! 118 words
ANSWER B: 3. Are you well organised, at work? at home? Gerold's indications.
I have no choose. I am organized at my work; I must be ! because my manager is terrible. If we don't respect the dates or the times, if we don't put order into the different files, every thing go wrong. Whe loose a lot of money if we arenot organised. At home, it's different. My house is often in mess and it is not important, really. Some time, I don't wash my plates and forks and knifes during several days, and I don't have enough of plates. My parents tell I'm disgusting and I will never be married, but I laugh. I don't like thigs organized. I have enough organization at work! 118 words
ANSWER B: 3. Are you well organised, at work? at home? my indications.
I have no choose. I am organized at my work; I must be ! because my manager is terrible. If we don't respect the dates or the times, if we don't put order into the different files, every thing go wrong. Whe loose a lot of money if we arenot organised. At home, it's different. My house is often in mess and it is not important, really. Some time, I don't wash my plates and forks and knifes during several days, and I don't have enough of plates. My parents tell I'm disgusting and I will never be married, but I laugh. I don't like thigs organized. I have enough organization at work! 118 words
Ce texte n'a pas été relu, ou l'a mal été.
Il y a des typos (de toute évidence) et des espaces manquants ; 'organise' est tantôt écrit avec un 'z' 
et tantôt avec un 's' 
. Il faut choisir. Il n'y a pas de grosses fautes, mais les phrases sont élémentaires. Il faut enrichir ce texte. C'est parti !
Réponse : Let's suggest 87/ Taking it easy 33 de E)
answerB tOPIC 3
Ma suggestion selon vos précieuses indications et désirs.
I have no choice. I am organised in my work; I have to be! because my manager is very demanding and strict. If we do not meet deadlines or schedules, if we do not keep order in the various files, everything goes wrong. We lose a lot of money if we are not organised. At home, it’s different. My house is often in disorder and it’s really not important. Sometimes, I don't do the dishes for several days, and as I have a small amount of crockery, I often run out of clean plates. My parents say I am disgusting and that I will never get married, but I am laughing at it, I don’t care, I don’t like organised things. I have enough organisational constraints at work!
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